Bonjour, j'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et je suis pas du tout sûr qu'il soit juste donc je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait me le corriger s'il vous p

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et je suis pas du tout sûr qu'il soit juste donc je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait me le corriger s'il vous plait:

"During my trip,
I have visited The Seven Wonders of the World with my best friend.

We have started our trip to China.
We have visited the Great Wall of China.
We haven’t see it hall, she is very great.
Then, we went to Agra (in India) for visited the Taj Mahal.
At 8 am, we arrived to Agra Airport and we are sleeping to Atulyaa Taj , the next day, at 14 pm we visited to the Taj Mahal with our guide. This is the biggest monument that I visit !
We have been to Jordanie.
We have been to the city of Kerak,
We have walk through the Siq for we have seen the Pétra, we have seen the Khazneh, It’s an wonderful city !!
We have slept Radisson Blu Tala Bay Resort, It’s a beautifull hotel.

Next, we went see my aunt in Roma, in Italia. We saw the Colisée with her. This huge Roman Amphitheatre dazzled me!

Three days ago, at 3 pm we finally arrived at the international airport of Rio de Janeiro ! We slept in the magnificent hotel " Rio Othon Palace " and the next day we saw the redeemer Christ. The view was amazing !"