CORRECTION DE TEXTE SVP ANGLAIS , pouvez vous me dire si l'orthographe et la grammaire sont correcte svp ? et si mon texte est claire ? c'est une description d
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CORRECTION DE TEXTE SVP ANGLAIS , pouvez vous me dire si l'orthographe et la grammaire sont correcte svp ? et si mon texte est claire ? c'est une description d'image je suis sur de moi pour le contenue mais par contre pour les erreurs de grammaire et autres je suis vraiment nul
- This photo appears to represent a beach holiday.
There are 3 characters in the foreground.
A surfer with his board under his left arm that enters the water, it passes right next to a young woman in bikini that seems out of the sea, a fisherman who returns he caught a big fish, it is very well equipped, it has a mask and snorkel in the right hand he holds a spear, and in the left arm a fish, he has a suit and flippers.
In the background we can see three other characters, two boys and a girl , playing ball, the boy holding the balloon also a swimming cap on his head, it seems amuse. There behind a woman who makes water skiing and a man wearing sunglasses, it leads the ship.
And for finire there's this woman behind a boat (sailboat) with a person in it.
In the background is a sailboard with someone above, behind the horizon and the clouds white
- This photo appears to represent a beach holiday.
There are 3 characters in the foreground.
A surfer with his board under his left arm that enters the water, it passes right next to a young woman in bikini that seems out of the sea, a fisherman who returns he caught a big fish, it is very well equipped, it has a mask and snorkel in the right hand he holds a spear, and in the left arm a fish, he has a suit and flippers.
In the background we can see three other characters, two boys and a girl , playing ball, the boy holding the balloon also a swimming cap on his head, it seems amuse. There behind a woman who makes water skiing and a man wearing sunglasses, it leads the ship.
And for finire there's this woman behind a boat (sailboat) with a person in it.
In the background is a sailboard with someone above, behind the horizon and the clouds white
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1. Réponse LauraOlivier15
Correction:
This photo appears to represent a beach holiday.
There are 3 characters in the foreground.
A surfer with his board under his left arm that enters the water, it passes right next to a young woman in a bikini that seems out of the sea, a fisherman who returns, he caught a big fish, it is very well equipped, it has a mask and snorkel in the right hand he holds a spear, and in the left arm a fish, he has a suit and flippers.
In the background, we can see three other characters, two boys and a girl, playing ball, the boy holding the balloon also a swimming cap on his head, it seems amuse. There behind a woman who makes water skiing and a man wearing sunglasses, it leads the ship.And for finire there's this woman behind a boat (sailboat) with a person in it.In the background is a sailboard with someone above, behind the horizon and the clouds white -
2. Réponse Marrocaine
c est trop bien fait et juste c est juste parfait rien a dire merveilleux tkt ok