bonjour j'ai besoin d'aide pour un devoirs je voudrais savoir si ces juste si ses faut corrige-moi Hello my name’s Inés and I’m eleven years olg. I’m from Fonta

Hello,  my name is Ines and I'm eleven years old.    
I'm from Fontaine de Vaucluse. --- Tu peux aussi dire: I come from Fontaine de V..

I don't have brothers or sisters.
 
 In my free time, I play sports, I do cooking (together) with my cousines and  read  books.

My favourite activity  is swimming.
Yes, I love music, but I don't play computer games.
  I like to watch TV with my family.    -- tu peux aussi dire :  I like watching TV with my family.

  I love chatting  with my friends,  but I dont chat at school.

Bonjour,
Hello my name is Inès and I'm eleven years old.
I´am from Fontaine de Vaucluse. I don´t have brothers and sisters. In my free time I practice sport, I cook with my cousines and read a book. My favorite activitie is swiming. Yes I love music but I don´t play computer games. I like watch TV with my family. I love chat with my friends but I don't like school

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