Saluuut , j'ai besoin d'aider à ecrire une lettre pour ce sujet d'anglais.. your friend works hard but he gets low marks. - Write him a letter to give him some

Dear Pete,

I have had your letter and I m very sorry you have not had the good marks you wanted allthough you worked hard.
I really think that it's good to work hard but you need some help : please read those little tips :

- plan ahead your work !
- when you start don't listen to music or tv....
- be sure to understand what you have to do : in doubt ask the teacher or a friend
- for the story writing : write it first. and forget about it
- on day 2 re-read it : correct the grammar. ask yourself if the story is undersandable ?
if not re-write the parts which are not valauble

Always re-read what you've done !

For the lessons : your should try the mind maping : it helps a lot !

keep it up
xoxo